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Here is the peer review.
Overall, great job. It took me a while before I could find something to offer criticism on. lol.
Paragraph 1
-You are making a lot of general statements about entrepreneurship without really making any really solid introduction to your actual topic, or purpose of your essay.
-Give the reader a stronger sense of what to expect from the essay.
-The last line of the paragraph ‘We read articles……on how to become a successful business owner” is the only sentance introducing your topic, weakening the overal purpose of your opening paragraph.
Paragraph 2
-Directly addresses semester conversation
-Develops conversation
-Discusses possible sources
-offers direction
Paragraph 3
-uses article to further evidence for semester conversation
-purpose of article was to develop a semester topic. Clearly identify the topic (starting a consultant business).
-graceful transition into inquiry question
-open-ended, excelent inquiry question
-to further strengthen your essay, include suggestions for complicating evidence, (such as the disadvantages/problems with a consultant business) and how you will use it to strengthen your arguement by addressing all aspects of it.
Paragraph 4
(this essay was supposed to have 5 paragraphs, i think you forgot to include either the conlusion or the second to last paragraph, bc you have only 4 paragraphs)
-If you intended your last paragraph to be paragraph 4, then:
-further discuss/develop your inquiry question
-If you intended to make your last paragraph the conclusion, then:
-answer the “so what?” question. (i.e., What will your essay have accomplished? What questions should it have answered? What kind of knowledge has it provided the reader with? What have you offered to the reader at the end of your inquiry? How should the reader utilize this knowledge?)