essay 1

Iman Ahmad                                                                           September 13, 2008

Prof. Arenstein

English 1000C-133- 70891

Essay 1

 

                Writing essay one was challenging. It took me a couple days to finish the product. I definitely used my primary sources about eighty eight percent of the time. So using my primary source which was my conversation and my whole ROC1 helped very much writing this essay. I believe this essay was strong and really developed a better understanding of my object text.  Disappointingly there were some weaknesses in the essay. Some of the paragraph I believe could have been stronger with additional information. But overall the essay is strong and did interpret the object text well with a deeper meaning. 

   Iman Ahmad

Arenstein

English 1000C-133- 70891

Essay Outline

I.                   Inquiry question: What economic, social, cultural, and external factors affect the overall value of my business and what role does my home office play among the factors?

 

II.                 The Development of Thesis

A.    Hypothesis: Business is defective when negativity in the environment begins to cause interference.

B.     Thesis: The overall value of any business decreases because factors including lack of resources, lack of business knowledge, cultural clashes, and competitors interfere with the progress made by your business through the home office.

III.              Introduction

IV.             Supporting Evidence Standard Business

A.    Tasks of standard business

V.                Supporting Evidence  Consulting Business

A.    Task of consulting business

VI.             Supporting Evidence Negative factor

A.    Lack of resources

B.     Affect on object text

VII.          Supporting Evidence Negative Factor

A.    Cultural aspect

B.     Affect on object text

VIII.       Supporting Evidence Negative Factor

A.    Competitors

B.     Affect on object text.

IX.              Important aspect needed to succeed.                              X. Conclusion

 

 

Iman Ahmad                                                                           September 10, 2008

Prof. Arenstein

English 1000C-133- 70891

Essay 1

 

            Inquiry question: What economic, social, cultural, and external factors affect the overall value of my business and what role does my home office play among the factors?

 

My Home Office, So What About It?

 

            People come up with brilliant ideas and use their creation to collect millions of dollars. The idea turns into a fully fledged money formulating business. As the business keeps rolling, a home office begins to develop and becomes the control room. Now through the home office business owners begin to maneuver around the negative factors depleting business income. The home office is the cornerstone of business success especially if you run a consulting business. However there are many unconstructive harms that try to damage your self- accomplishment. The overall value of any business decreases because factors including lack of resources, lack of business knowledge, cultural clashes, and competitors interfere with the progress made by your business through the home office.

            Any type of business is tough to run and necessitates almost all your time. In a standard business, there are many aspects the business owner needs to look at. For example you need to understand how many employees are needed to be hired in order for the business to operate efficiently. If you hire too little then, customers become unsatisfied with the slowness of the service. Now hiring too many employees you will end up losing money and money loss should be the first of your worries. Also the business owner has to be concerned with the set up of his store. An easy accessible store is always for the better. Another stress for the owner is buying the entire product supply for the store.  Despite all the stresses of administrating the business, there are also many factors that affect the business from obtaining profit. Some of these factors are more harmful to a store running business and other factors are disgraceful towards a home consulting business.

            A consulting business is selling your expertise of a chosen field to others in need of some guidance. A requirement for starting up a consulting business is a workplace for all the transactions, and the meeting with clients. Usually the workplace is a home office. The home office is the core, the heart and soul of the success of your business. The home office keeps the business organized and beneficial to you. Working through your home office gives you comfort and more confidence to make a good sale of advice which can generate money. 

            One negative factor that damages your business representation is the lack of resources. In a consulting business the legal structure most people follow is sole proprietorship. And in a sole proprietorship all the legal liabilities become personal liabilities. So the resource lacked is something other than a personal liability. The factor also affects the home office because then your business could get officially shut down.  The consultant must make sure this personal liability never happens and by working in the home office can stop this cautionary act.

            Another unconstructive factor could be a cultural aspect. The clients will range from anyone who needs some great advice from a consultant to get them self out of the gutter. Suppose a foreigner who came to America to develop a small business of his own and wants to incorporate his country’s flavor here, saw your advertisement and seeks your guidance. This immigrant might not speak any English, or doesn’t understand any of the American traditions. The role your home office must play is a comforting role. The home office must be a place for progress. And every time he comes back you get paid. So despite the negative aspect that is cultural, the role of the home office must be to bring back the client and develop trust.

            Competitors are definitely what every consultant needs to look out for. The advertisements you put out in newspapers, or on the radio and television, must be top notch. Mentioning a comforting and helpful meeting place in each of your ads can be extremely helpful in drawing customers. The home office plays the role of aficionado. Your home office must be welcoming in order for your consultant business to soar. As long as the home office is better than your competitors then it’s one less step to further success.

            An important aspect that you as a consultant must have is obviously business knowledge. Skill, experience, and knowledge in your specific field on consultation are desirable credentials. The vital credentials must be evident throughout your home office. The clients you serve must be able to have trust in your word. As long as they can see you’re qualified and capable the customers will keep coming. And all the recommendations your get from your patrons, the more likely your business will grow. As long your consulting business keeps growing the more of a chance for profit and ultimate success and self satisfaction. Therefore the home office also acts as an area for exhibiting your achievements and furthering your cliental

Overall the home office becomes a big key towards success of the set consulting business. The main role the home office plays is maneuvering your consulting business around the negative factors trying to harm the possible income in pursuit. The home office acts as a display for your achievements, the control room of all transactions, a comforter to all clients, and a source for furthering success. The center, most essential and fundamental element of your consulting business is the home office. After all the research and conversations, the home office is the make or break you part of consulting business.